It was very cool but a couple things that bother me are your spelling, your Criss Angel like things, and there are no live performances.
I will not flame you like the other guys I will merely state why I think it needs to improve and then move on. I won't flame you, or diss you, or yell at you, or bash you, or rape y... I mean, argue with you.
1: SPELLING: It looks sort of unprofessional. My advice would be, before adding the description to Youtube. write down the title and description in Microsoft Word and spell check it. then just copy and paste the title and everything else. This will help a lot.
2: CRISS ANGEL-LIKE VIDEOS: This is a bit annoying. There is no need to do every illusion he has ever done. Mix it up. Malke some up. I mean make them look original. Don't just go I found another way to do it and it looks the same. I mean make it totally original. And also, the 'Continuous shot" is distracting. Say it once before the shot then get it out of there.
3: LIVE PERFORMANCES: Somehow I find it hard to believe that the camera man thinks it is pirating your own material. It sounds a bit far-fetched. Maybe not even a huge audiance for a video. But have say, 3 -5 kids come and watch. Film it that way, then nobody will be able to say anything about that. You have proof.
Couple more actually...
4: DON'T CALL THEM SEASONS: It is a bit annoying when there is one trick and that is considered one episode in a season. I would say that you should just call them like Chair Dissapearnce, Chain Thorugh Neck, or Fire On My Face. But that is just my personal pet peeve.
But other than those few things you keep me entertained and I like to watch the videos. so keep it up. don't argue with anyone here about it just keep making videos and maybe take some of my advice and others advice into mind when filming. bY taking others advice you'll find that you'll end up with a lot less problems.
Dylan P.
I will not flame you like the other guys I will merely state why I think it needs to improve and then move on. I won't flame you, or diss you, or yell at you, or bash you, or rape y... I mean, argue with you.
1: SPELLING: It looks sort of unprofessional. My advice would be, before adding the description to Youtube. write down the title and description in Microsoft Word and spell check it. then just copy and paste the title and everything else. This will help a lot.
2: CRISS ANGEL-LIKE VIDEOS: This is a bit annoying. There is no need to do every illusion he has ever done. Mix it up. Malke some up. I mean make them look original. Don't just go I found another way to do it and it looks the same. I mean make it totally original. And also, the 'Continuous shot" is distracting. Say it once before the shot then get it out of there.
3: LIVE PERFORMANCES: Somehow I find it hard to believe that the camera man thinks it is pirating your own material. It sounds a bit far-fetched. Maybe not even a huge audiance for a video. But have say, 3 -5 kids come and watch. Film it that way, then nobody will be able to say anything about that. You have proof.
Couple more actually...
4: DON'T CALL THEM SEASONS: It is a bit annoying when there is one trick and that is considered one episode in a season. I would say that you should just call them like Chair Dissapearnce, Chain Thorugh Neck, or Fire On My Face. But that is just my personal pet peeve.
But other than those few things you keep me entertained and I like to watch the videos. so keep it up. don't argue with anyone here about it just keep making videos and maybe take some of my advice and others advice into mind when filming. bY taking others advice you'll find that you'll end up with a lot less problems.
Dylan P.