First thoughts - I like that I can see your face. While the music is not my style, I like that you didn't use the typical stuff.
Now, with the bits of magic in there - it would be better if they had just a bit more time to breathe. The clips are so quick you can't even really see what's going on.
Also, the music and the video don't really compliment each other in the sense that you're just doing these things while music plays. It's good if you can kind of sync up parts of the video with the beat or something.