Here is a video of me performing the classic pass after four months of practice. It still needs work, I would highly appreciate some advice.
http://www.vimeo.com/6042625
First of all, there isnt need of speeding a bit the video, it looks obvious.
Now onto the pass, I really thought that you were practicing the classic pass all this time!
To be sincere im not that familiar with this kind of pass (the closest thing that I do is the outjogged herman shift) but here you go a couple of tips
*You are raising way too much the left hand, there is a lot of movement there.
*you can see the two packets being brought toguether, try blending a natural action to have both hands on the deck, try to do a all around square up just after the shift, to disguise the two packets beong brought toguether.
Now to be sincere, there are a couple of reasons of why I dont like this shift and I will tell you why.
The angles are pretty bad:
*if they look from the front, they will caught you
*if they look from the right, they will caught you, you either need a eagle vision angle(I dont know how to call that ), or to have people at your left (where your left hand is providing cover) to actually pull off the pass.
If you have the money I would recommend to buy the Aaron fisher's outjogged herman shift sleight from here, its great and it will show you some great things about technique with this kind of pass.
Hope that helped.