Here's a some stuff I added on to dan and dave's buck portal. Enjoy and tell me what you think http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DeEx73SlPzE
Cmon now you can figure out why the joker was there.. it was between the kings? and I'm glad at least one person here liked it : DNot bad, it does need some work. Play more magician in trouble than pissed off magician, the vibe gets off a bit. The swear word wasn't necessary.
Why is the joker face up? That part seemed a little unjustified/unexplained.
You have a nice idea, just refine it a bit and you have a good effect.
Your boy,
Fez
Cmon now you can figure out why the joker was there.. it was between the kings? and I'm glad at least one person here liked it : D
Hmm so are you guys saying just a redo but with different patter?
Second that.no im saying work on it, practice, over and over again.
make it smooth, work on handling the kings better.
criticize like you've never criticized before.