Nice production quality, the magic you chose was clear and well executed. I agree that you want to consider your target market when making your video... Including some live performance wouldn't hurt, and you definitely can intercut some of this footage into it. I think the most important thing to do is to make yourself seem to be already the thing that you are trying to get booked for... so if you want to be working cruiseships, your video should look like you are already doing that type of work.. if you want to be headlining theatres, you need to make yourself seem like you are already a celebrity... (include tv appearances, news interviews, etc)