Transpo Effect: Feedback

[Gs3K2]

Hey guys, I put up a video of a transpo effect iv'e been working on and was just looking for some feedback on it.

by the way the video is kinda crappy because i dont have my camera or my laptop with my editing stuff so its movie maker and blackberry camera so dont expect greatness, thanks.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LQ-PW74EvlA

 

[Cedric Taylor]

Hey guys, I put up a video of a transpo effect iv'e been working on and was just looking for some feedback on it.

by the way the video is kinda crappy because i dont have my camera or my laptop with my editing stuff so its movie maker and blackberry camera so dont expect greatness, thanks.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LQ-PW74EvlA

pretty decent....get at me sometime via pm or e-mail and we can take that transpo to the max......

 

[Gs3K2]

awesome thanks

 

[Jacob L]

Few things....
If you are sorry for the long ass intro, take it out! All we need is like 3-5 seconds of a screen showing what the effect is called, not it sitting there for 24 seconds with a song that does not flow at all with the effect, (besides the name, I guess) If you are going to use music instead of patter, make it flow well with the trick, it makes it much more pleasing to watch.

That being said, the idea behind the effect was nice, but I thought there was too much convincing of the cards. The constant showing of the back and face gave me more reason to suspect something than just a flash of the face and a subtle show of the back.

Hope this helps, I'm only trying to make you better. And sorry if I can off like an ass, I didnt mean to have that tone, it's all constructive criticism.

Your boy,
Fez