My two cents:
1: If you are doing a single coin routine, use a bigger coin (a morgan perhaps). If someone were to get on and post a video of them doing some card tricks and at the end they said, "by the way I only use 40 cards, because my hands are small and doing tricks with all 52 is really hard" EVERYONE on this forum would burn them at the stake. TBH, that routine you did would not that much harder with a morgan (except for maybe the muscle pass).
2: That is a LOT of patter for routine with not much visual content. It is a good starting ground, but sometimes too much patter can kill an effect (something that a lot of magicians fail to notice). Either add more phases, bigger phases, or cut down on the patter.
3: I agree with other people's comments about changing the ending from "now it has traveled back in time to being nothing." I like the idea of taking the coin out of the coin person, and in the end, having it travel back in time to being in the coin purse again.
1: If you are doing a single coin routine, use a bigger coin (a morgan perhaps). If someone were to get on and post a video of them doing some card tricks and at the end they said, "by the way I only use 40 cards, because my hands are small and doing tricks with all 52 is really hard" EVERYONE on this forum would burn them at the stake. TBH, that routine you did would not that much harder with a morgan (except for maybe the muscle pass).
2: That is a LOT of patter for routine with not much visual content. It is a good starting ground, but sometimes too much patter can kill an effect (something that a lot of magicians fail to notice). Either add more phases, bigger phases, or cut down on the patter.
3: I agree with other people's comments about changing the ending from "now it has traveled back in time to being nothing." I like the idea of taking the coin out of the coin person, and in the end, having it travel back in time to being in the coin purse again.