You have the basic handling and technique down which is good. I do suggest that you still keep working on becoming a bit more comfortable with cards in general. You definitely have the basic handling down, but to be honest, your first shuffle, spread, and re-picking up of the spread looked a bit unpracticed and a bit "choppy".
As a motto, hold cards until they become a part of your hand. I don't know how to put it, but the cards still kind of seemed like a foreign guest to your hands, which took a bit away from the "magic" happening.