Feedback
Hi Six,
You have some creative stuff brother - really interesting thinking. Just some feedback I wanted to share.
The gimmicked version is really well handled - I like the faints you throw in, but the discrepancy in the ungimmicked version is very good - totally natural and not visually disturbing. it's teh gimmick that allows for this and your handling of the two cards. It didn't fool me the first time - but my eyes did get big, instantly liked it - if I didn't know about the gimmicks, it would have fooled me...then again, if I didn't know, why would you take this feedback to heart? Overall, It is a very good trick - you got a winner.
As for the ungimmicked version, I think the discrepancy is too big. I am sure you can "get away with it", but it looks like two seperate effects. I found your card...and look...BAM...a card magically appears between the two cards. There is no natural off beat either Six. It raises those "subliminal alarms" that give the audience clues. They don't know what happened, but they know you did something. That is my personal opinion - but I hope you consider looking for another method. In short, the discrepancy is done with heat on the deck...because of how it's constructed the action is happening there, so I want to look at the deck.
Anyhow, look forward to seeing more of your things - hope you get it in ink soon, you don't want this stuff stolen. Cheers.