This is my job, although these days I have better skills programming behind-the-scenes stuff than designing the visuals. I'm feeling sick right now, and apologize if any humor doesn't get proofread out. Just know that I already think you did great and now I'm looking for smaller details to help you out.
Okay, first of all, it's good! You have avoided a metric ton of beginner mistakes. It's simple and clean in appearance. You've outdone almost every person your age who ever tried to author his own website.
If it's available to you then please pay $10 for a .com domain name. You might even get it closer to $5 in the right places. Some internet providers have actually blocked .tk domain names in the past. I'm not sure if many still do, but it could be a problem. A .com address actually means "commercial" and it looks like you mean business.
My first applicable question was "
Where does he perform?" The city is buried a little, and the state isn't even mentioned. So, from the front page.
Teenage Magician, Arman Sangalang is the perfect entertainer for your next event. Arman brings a new fresh feel of fun, charm, and excitement to the magic that will keep your guests entertained for the whole night. He has performed to hundreds of people in St. Charles area. His magic will leave your guests talking about him for weeks to come.
I can speak from a generic marketing perspective, but not from marketing magic services. Someone else probably has better advice on most of your text. Here, I can only ask for one thing:
I personally think the appropriate sentence would look better if phrased more like this:
He has performed for hundreds of people in and around St. Charles Illinois. Maybe even bold "St. Charles Illinois." Of course, it should be in your own words.
No matter what event you have, Arman has the perfect repertoire of tricks, presentation, and skill to fit your event. Even though Arman is fifteen years old, he has been performing magic to the highest caliber for three years. To contact Arman please email at {omitted}
I have to ask, since it came up elsewhere: [thread=38928]No matter what event?[/thread] There may be some adventure in receiving awkward inquiries. Yet, it may put you and your potential clients at rest if you simply name your best areas.
For even better ideas on how to do this right, see your own Entertainment Services page. You've already done better than I can help you with. I just think a very short variation could work better than "No matter what event..."
About Me
Overall I'd say to proofread the text. Say it out loud, and ask if it sounds natural. Ask how you can say the same things with the smallest possible number of words. This is something you're doing
very well at already. I'm just asking you to go one step further, and only on this page.
The "Likes" on the right side of your about page are kind of distracting. "Good times" and "Having fun" are even taboo for a 25 year old job-seeker's image, and they might hurt your chances of getting work.
To add praise, the Facebook page and Twitter feed are showing the professional side that they need to. Good stuff.
I
really like the "Entertainment Services" page.
One last praise & critique. You've done a great job of putting your contact information exactly where it needs to be. Unfortunately, it's not on your "Contact Me" page.
Anyway, I like the site. It's a clean design. It's welcoming. You have images of yourself performing on your site and your Facebook page. Your text is very short and direct, as it should be. You did really good work.
Quick Edit: Colin looks to be doing a great job taking on some of the grammatical issues.