Once again...
"I'm sorry, but I would have to agree with everyone's assessment. The magic seemed beginnerish, as well as the flourishing. My guess is that you recently got into magic (by recently I mean in the past year) and that Criss Angel is the reason you got into magic. Now, if I'm wrong, I'll tell you why the impression I got from you was beginnerish.
First, if you say you have a "new realm of magic", you better have a new realm, which is quite, quite tough to do. Second, your magic and flourishing was beginner level. Third, you dress like Criss Angel and someone who has been a magician longer than a year would not do that.
Now, how do you fix the beginnerish? First, be humble with your pursuits. Instead of posting a video of yourself saying that it's amazing, post a video and ask for constructive criticism so that you can grow. Take the advice that is given, if it seems reasonable and is not a joke. Second, practice, practice, practice. Get some books (they are packed with magic) and learn some new stuff. Also, for flourishes, get the System, Trilogy or Dangerous. Also, practice those flourishes, because the flourishes in the video were slightly slow and choppy. Third, change your warddrobe. How did you dress before you saw Criss Angel? Dress like that, because that's how YOU, not someone else, really dresses.
Please don't take this as mean spirited or a bashing. I'm merely giving constructive criticism and I hope that you do not take it lightly. Peace!
Tyler"
Now, I'm out and hoping you'll actually read it this time TIllusion.