You're asking for advice from a crowd that thinks juxtaposing Daniel Garcia with ninjas is the pinnacle of comedy. What did you expect? Anyway, an interesting effect. And, the editing aside, at least the framing here was closer to competence than normal. What context do you put this is? I'd much rather see a video of an actual performance so I can get a better idea of how this works into a routine and what motivation you've created for it. I vote just a mass deletion on the people acting like unfunny twits. Why make the good suffer for a bunch of self-diagnosed Asperger's children? Frankly I'd be happy if the forum just left the comedy to me. Everyone knows that I have the highest rate of lulz per gallon (of Scotch).